LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SoulEater: Maka]

Lovely face

the face and hair are both clean and done very well... however i feel that the sythe looks almost like a giant chilly the way its shaded and highlighted.. her legs look tiny and her arm going towards her glove is either to small... or if its not coming towards us the glove is to big along with the hand... i hope you can see where needs work and improve it... :3

exninja123 responds:

thanks! :D

[Earth Bound]

Shiney!

Perfection in the form of artwork that is right there.. the water shine and effects off the skins are perfect... love the root system looking thing (i take it thats what it is) is awe inspiring... you really have improved from some of the work i have seen you do... 10/10 isnt high enough for you!... truely a masterpiece... love the background and rocks in the forground... and the mood is just summed up nicely...

20/10... thats what it should be... :3

Geneticeye responds:

thank you again ^^

[Purple Force]

Nicely done

simple idea... well done, great and almost perfect skin tones and shading on her... love the semi realsim you have going on here... also the details really stand out... good work and hope to see more from you in the future... 10/10

Geneticeye responds:

:) thx for scouting haha, there will sure be more to come!!

[my munnies]

Nice collection there....

Love the munny's you got there.. hope your going to enter in with the art contest luis will be doing soon based on the mini munny's (which is what they look like)... love the ideas you have going on there... the shead one has to be my favourt... look forward to seeing more... :P

[Infested Terran]

More starcraft!?...

i like the detail in this one, a bit of time (or spare time) went into this i think... the shading is nice and the contrast of the mono tone areas give it that zerg feel... love the claws and stuff coming out of the boots... however some of the lines need touching up beacuse there not straight or notched... keeping the shading within the lines of the picture would make it a ton better as well... but seen as its on paper theres not much you can do when your using pen... neaten up the details and your have yourself a lovely infested terran there... :P

Rhunyc responds:

Hey, I've seen you on the art forum. :) Nice art, btw! :)

Thanks for the c&c though! :D Much appreciated. :)

[Meeko]

WOW love the motion in this

the flow of both movement, smoke and hair are perfect!... athough i do feel her hair is well OTT (over the top) nice details to add extra character to the picture nice shading... i just love it... why not top marks?... looks really sketchy (i know its just a concept idea) but neaten it up and wola... lovely idea... and portrayed perfectly... :3

kamusaki responds:

thank you! im glad you like it, one of her powers is that she can control her hair that's why it's all over the place.

[Danser -- to dance]

elengent

not the most detailed you have... but the best in posture, size and movement... add some details into it, spend more time, make lines bolder and give more movement and you have a instand hit :D

[Gypsy girl]

good

detail is good and well placed to create a balance (athough her boots dont have as much detail as the rest of her in my eyes) nice way to avoid hands and eyes... shading on the rest of her would be nice other then her hair and face... and that skirt really starts to show your improvment... just need touching up the lines on the legs to corospond to the boots (they seem to be going in at different angles)... one more thing... try to use plain paper instead of lined... :P (yay for school doodles)

[Drifting away]

Movement :D

Very nicely done with the flow of wind and movement in this one... top half is super!... (still requires detail and shading to really give it umf!... the legs however arnt great... if we take her right leg as the normal here... her left foot should be bent on the ground at that angle unless she has it laying flat sideways in which you need to shorten it and make it more rounded to show that... getting alot better :3

[Sad girl]

good sizes

alot better then your first one... everything is in proportion (anime style) hair isnt mono toned (has a slight highlight)... would like to see this stronger highlighted... and the rest alot darker... lines are clean... still needs shading... also i just noticed her right leg needs to be a tiny bit thinner and her boot should start futher down her leg... otherwise she has two different sized shoes :P