like the doodle...
a few things look out of place for example her right shoulder looks strange with the fabric going down that much... also the top of her legs must be very toned to be that thin... seen as they get rather fat as they progress down... also her left hand seems small and same with her wrist...
Hey thanks a bunch dude. I'll use that advice in future art.
as illustration goes...
its nice... however i feel her arms are some what shorterthen they should be or it could just be the fact ones hiden behind a shield and ones at a strange angle... the colouring and shading on this one is better then the last one.. the sheild i would like to point out has a rebounced lighting effect which is a nice touch... the reflextive areas are nicely placed if not a tad over used... overall a good illustraion...
fantastic hair...
however... the hair is will done with the layers and all but the line art isnt great... it seems to basic and your relying on colours and shading to make the picture better but am affraid that your not putting the shading where its required... for example a large area of her grey dress is nearly the same colour... but some shade within the areas of the folds of which you have already drawn in prior to colouring... simple details really give it charm... but failing to get proper shading on this piece really kills it... i hope you can see what im getting at and see improved pieces... :3
this pic is kinda REALLY old, whatever you say isn't really relevant to my current situation anymore... :3
Great use of textures
The linework by its self is alright... could use with a bit of touching up here and there... the mono tone shading is well used but the thing that really makes it, is the texture underneath it all... without it, it would be average... but with it makes a hell of a difference and looks rather cool... i wouldnt say its perfect...
interesting
some lines are all over the place... they need tidying up... you have a 3 tone dress but only 3 tone skin?... shading isnt bad, has some details.. background adds a bit of story to the whole thing but i still think its to basic and not stylish... 5/10
funky postcard :P
Athough its a fantastic example of some of your early work... i still think the background doesnt help it much... the girl is fantastic as always with the colours just right to make it nether to bold or to faded... 8/10!
Yeah, it's not that much. Very little time, you know. Still, I thought it was better that plain white, grey or random filterrape.
I'll be trying new ways to improvise backgrounds.
Thank you for comment that matter!
Bold n stylish
nice style of straight 3 tone shading... very chunky and stylish not going to detail more of a cartoon / anime feel... love the simplisity of this piece... theres a few really minior areas that could have been touched up but apart from that and the lack of background (even a simple colour would have been a nice touch) this is fab... like to see more work like this...
good drawing
everything seems to look right and be the right distance and length... shading is good (i like the clothes the most) the face is lovely and i cant see how this could be improved much further...
Thank ye, sir. :3
Fantastic linework
love the three tone shading on this... its bold lines fit perfectly with what you wanted... as you said theres a fair amount of mistakes you most likey already know so i wont point them out again seen as your not going to change this... but yeah... like the style alot...
Face is lovely and well detailed...
the rest seems pritty plain and not much going on... love how your colours are transparent to show line work underneath... the text once again is making the score on this lower beacuse it doesnt fit in... reminds me of tifa
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