LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Out Of A Postcard]

funky postcard :P

Athough its a fantastic example of some of your early work... i still think the background doesnt help it much... the girl is fantastic as always with the colours just right to make it nether to bold or to faded... 8/10!

BizarroJoe responds:

Yeah, it's not that much. Very little time, you know. Still, I thought it was better that plain white, grey or random filterrape.
I'll be trying new ways to improvise backgrounds.
Thank you for comment that matter!

[Retro Anime Human Bunnie]

Bold n stylish

nice style of straight 3 tone shading... very chunky and stylish not going to detail more of a cartoon / anime feel... love the simplisity of this piece... theres a few really minior areas that could have been touched up but apart from that and the lack of background (even a simple colour would have been a nice touch) this is fab... like to see more work like this...

[Sexi Bunni]

good drawing

everything seems to look right and be the right distance and length... shading is good (i like the clothes the most) the face is lovely and i cant see how this could be improved much further...

Mrew responds:

Thank ye, sir. :3

[Sonia Character Sheet]

Face is lovely and well detailed...

the rest seems pritty plain and not much going on... love how your colours are transparent to show line work underneath... the text once again is making the score on this lower beacuse it doesnt fit in... reminds me of tifa

[Rockbabe Classic Roll]

love the line work under the colours...

like how you can still see the orginal line work under all the 3 tone shading... gives it more style then bog standard lines... athough i feel the text doesnt give it much of a boost... the girl is well drawn and the colours bold and bright... background is simple... i dont know if its the text but it feels dated...

[Girl Trooper]

smoooooth...

artwork is great... fantastic... just a few things that catch my eye... the "blocks" on the belt dont seem to be the same distance apart from each other, the plates over her chest arent the same as each other and i feel her thumb on the table should be futher back but thats just me i think... the colours are fantastic! and her face is drawn perfectly... simple splatty background for a nice break up and main focus on the girl... top marks poxpower :P

[jolie rouge]

lovely face details and colours...

athough i dont like how you have added lighting on the eyes and above the hair... it destroys the linework... also i found it quiet hard to work out where the notes connected... at first i though her hand was the blue note beacuse the sleeves join up to it... i think if you put the lighting under the line art and gave it a background... or even a simple one it would really bring it to life... at the moment the white is really killing this picture... a darker or even deep red background would give it a better all over feel... but thats just my thoughts...

[guitar marine]

one problem

the angle on the bolt pistol on the end is wrong... it should be the other way compaired to the bottom of the guitar... i like the little bits of detail and all... other then that one problem i really like it.. give it a tad more shading and wo'la... fantastic!

Edgelog responds:

yeah i noticed the gun aswell, but had penned it in before i could change it :(