LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[White Mage]

matt like girls!?!... what this!

ok ok... form an ART point of view... the lines are VERY messy (just look at HER right hand)... also theres an area which is peach not white/grey there as well.. simple cloth work and shades which are nice... slightly squished face, her hands are horrid, along with the lack of wrists and the thickness of her arm after the elbow... (you see where i mean)... areas i like are the fine details on the underwear and on her hair... the glasses and rose are a nice touch, also im not sure on the fading out at the bottom of the picture... i dont think it suits it...

overview... tidy it up, get the sizes and colours right... square it off nicely and possibly add a spash of colour to the background mabey... who knows... but not bad for some old work... 6/10

[Mask]

love the comic feel to this...

a few points i would like to make... the size of this is highly different to most artwork on here... the detail and suttle shading and lines give it that edge and the contrast is spot on... it really has that comic feel to it and is very well done... keeping in mind that this is for a comic... it hits all the right notes... 10/10

[Andreaflow]

intresting

love the background, love the detail... love everything about it... the lighting on the armor is correct and looks fab, the posture of the body is correct along with the lengths and details... very well done and i cant pick a single flaw out...
(apart from possibly the wings starting a little far down)

[Suida]

Loved this one Vortex

apart from the blaten fact that they are about to pop out... i really like how you draw and detail all your work... the lines are simple and fine and the shading is just perfect!!!... and with the background echoing the main feature its just a perfect example of what you can do :3... once again im not keen on the eyes, i feel they seem out of place slightly... but thats mostly me... however this time they dont seem so bright compaired to the rest as its very brightly coloured and toned... 9/10

Vortex00 responds:

Whats going to be awesome is when I finish the games and animations with this level of work O_O! She was supposed to be looking down at *ahem* her assets, but it's difficult for me to draw this and have it look 100% correct. Maybe I will master it later when I can get a chance. Thx for the review!

[One... Two. Three!]

read this backwards!?!?

pain... ah the pain... anway onto the artwork... simple flash style shading... nice bold outline and cartoon feel... slightly strange and twisted joke, priceless exspresion on the (number 2.. no pun intended) cat... but seriously.. reading it backwards is just nasty... why whould you be happy? :3... O.O... o_o...

an intresting conscept...

[Droid]

intertesting ideas

first off... we can all see it isnt finished... for what is partly finished the finalproduct would be amazing... the art portal tends to frown apon unfinished work been put into the public eye... i can see alot of work went into it and alot of detail as well but as it stands is not a good example... so... from what i can see of it... i dont understand what that grey (smoke? / Movement) area is... some of the linework on the left arm seems to be thiner then the line work on the leg... or not as bold... and no shading... i really like this but im afriad without seeing the finished product i cant help you improve much...

[Teacher's Pet]

another geat one here...

i was scrolling down to read your comments and i could of sweared it moved... slightly shocked i scroll up and wait... smooth :3... very fluient and very well done, love how all the lines in this one are roughly the same so areas dont fell out of place... the exspresion is spot on and the whole pose it well thought out... another great example of what you are capable off... 9/10!

BizarroJoe responds:

Haha, maybe you thought you were losing it at last! I wanted people to react like that... "Hmm... a cute schoolgirl... Waitaminute, she BLINKED?!!"
Sadly, that's one of the few animation tricks I'm capable of...
I'm glad you liked it.

[butterfly]

loving the style... few things wrong

photo copy of some sort?... anway... her thumb is tiny... theres not much picture to work of, and from what i can see shows good anime style... i feel that theres not enough picture of quality in this picture to give it anything over a 5/10, work on getting the sizes right of her fingers and thumbs and try again...

reckoner responds:

hey thanks a bunch ! it's an older picture, originally it was colored in pencil. I put this one up cause i want to make another in pencil sooo that thumb will be fixed and there'll be more to see, in time haha :]

[Emancipation]

simple and elegent

smooth lines and grey scale tones, very artistic pose along with the blend of her leg to the strange break up... the hair seems to be lacking some what at the back of the head... i hope you see what i mean... overall a good job, i feel you might need to take a break and look at the whole thing to see what may be wrong... or get a friend to look... it helps you pick out small mistakes...

[Disgrace]

love the background on this...

highly artistic and detailed... im not familiar with HR Giger's work but this reminds me of a demonette / cyber hybrid... very nice use of tones and shade on this and love how you have kept the colours to a few for a more realistic tone... overall its very well done!!!.. would love to see more creature and orginal artwork from you... keep it up!