LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Regalia]

Detail is key...

and my word have you done detail... the quality of detail in this is exteamly high... the finenes of the line and miror immage is great... left eye seems a tiny bit smaller then the right eye but i really love it... top quality work

[Girl]

Clean cut...

Very clean... very well done, very neat... i feel her forhead is a tad square or flat... and not as rounded as i would have thought it would have been... shoulders seem very far down as well.. but i love the shading and the qualtiy... 9/10

MangArtist responds:

Thank you!
Gotcha. This was supposed to be an anime portrait of my friend so I was trying to get some of the head anatomy to look the same, but I can see what you mean by it looking flat. Should have added more shading. -_-
Gosh, I see what you mean about the shoulders. O_o (just noticed)
Thanks again! :D

[Sitting Pretty]

yet another lovely piece of artwork

the tree doesnt seem very realisitic due to the face the brances wouldnt be that close together nore would they have so little twigs coming of them... that aside, the colours are striking and deep a nice feel to the piece with the black widow spider along side a woman in very gothic clothes, love the attention to the face with the slighty red nose as if she is cold or has been crying (like she doesnt feel to good)... nice shine effect on the web string... and all the other little details that bring it up a touch... good work and would love to see more...

Mrew responds:

Thank you very much. :]
I have a hard time with trees in colour, I need to practise. :<

[Hot Gamer]

Love the colours and details...

the amount of details and attention to each one is very high... the linework isnt spot on but its bold and shows you what you need to see... bag strap *tri force* seems very flat and could use with some bumping up and shadows, the rest of it seems very good overall because theres so much to take it... and so many minor faults with it... but overall a good piece of illustration...

Leema-k responds:

Thank you very much for the comment. I see what you mean. Maybe i can fix it some how

[aisha number one]

like the doodle...

a few things look out of place for example her right shoulder looks strange with the fabric going down that much... also the top of her legs must be very toned to be that thin... seen as they get rather fat as they progress down... also her left hand seems small and same with her wrist...

suzuki-zombie responds:

Hey thanks a bunch dude. I'll use that advice in future art.

[Amber as Cassandra]

as illustration goes...

its nice... however i feel her arms are some what shorterthen they should be or it could just be the fact ones hiden behind a shield and ones at a strange angle... the colouring and shading on this one is better then the last one.. the sheild i would like to point out has a rebounced lighting effect which is a nice touch... the reflextive areas are nicely placed if not a tad over used... overall a good illustraion...

[Sonia as Medli]

fantastic hair...

however... the hair is will done with the layers and all but the line art isnt great... it seems to basic and your relying on colours and shading to make the picture better but am affraid that your not putting the shading where its required... for example a large area of her grey dress is nearly the same colour... but some shade within the areas of the folds of which you have already drawn in prior to colouring... simple details really give it charm... but failing to get proper shading on this piece really kills it... i hope you can see what im getting at and see improved pieces... :3

kevinsano responds:

this pic is kinda REALLY old, whatever you say isn't really relevant to my current situation anymore... :3

[Girl]

Great use of textures

The linework by its self is alright... could use with a bit of touching up here and there... the mono tone shading is well used but the thing that really makes it, is the texture underneath it all... without it, it would be average... but with it makes a hell of a difference and looks rather cool... i wouldnt say its perfect...

[Aces.]

interesting

some lines are all over the place... they need tidying up... you have a 3 tone dress but only 3 tone skin?... shading isnt bad, has some details.. background adds a bit of story to the whole thing but i still think its to basic and not stylish... 5/10