LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Girl Trooper]

smoooooth...

artwork is great... fantastic... just a few things that catch my eye... the "blocks" on the belt dont seem to be the same distance apart from each other, the plates over her chest arent the same as each other and i feel her thumb on the table should be futher back but thats just me i think... the colours are fantastic! and her face is drawn perfectly... simple splatty background for a nice break up and main focus on the girl... top marks poxpower :P

[Kei the Ronin Cowgirl]

Top notch...

Line work is fab, both both and highly artistic... colours are bright yet deep, proper shading and highlighting with the reflective shades, immense detail, and yet like sci-fi said... that ankle look pitty screwed, but non the less an awsome illustration...

lockebelmont responds:

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked the color, i really wanted the image to POP! Cheers

[jolie rouge]

lovely face details and colours...

athough i dont like how you have added lighting on the eyes and above the hair... it destroys the linework... also i found it quiet hard to work out where the notes connected... at first i though her hand was the blue note beacuse the sleeves join up to it... i think if you put the lighting under the line art and gave it a background... or even a simple one it would really bring it to life... at the moment the white is really killing this picture... a darker or even deep red background would give it a better all over feel... but thats just my thoughts...

[guitar marine]

one problem

the angle on the bolt pistol on the end is wrong... it should be the other way compaired to the bottom of the guitar... i like the little bits of detail and all... other then that one problem i really like it.. give it a tad more shading and wo'la... fantastic!

Edgelog responds:

yeah i noticed the gun aswell, but had penned it in before i could change it :(

[technaught]

Dread with Built in amps upgrade?

line work is good athough i feel it could use with more shading but after all this is just a doodle... its funny but i feel its lacking some artistic flair in the drawing... either get a colour version going on or spend a bit more time making it neater and tidying up round the edges...

[Popsicle Gal]

really love your work

its simple, its bold, its stunning!... nothing comes anywhere near your style... i dont like it... i love it!

BizarroJoe responds:

Much appreciated! I'll see if I can post another one tomorrow.
I'd also feel humbly flattered to see my name in your userpage. *sniff*
Got to watch your StarCraft movies yet.
Thank you and Godspeed.

[silent death]

love the linework

very stylish anime, got its own style going on inside the broad name of "anime"... the details and finishing touches are nice, the shading and colours give the elements of what they are more infomation about them, for example the gnarled staff and the metalic rings in the scyth... i would like to see this lined out and coloured (starting on a new piece of paper) and possibly coloured... the face is lovely and the pose suits her well...

[pendashcore]

i am some what scared...

i take this is for the bad game art?... its very twisted and demonic compaired to the really (cute pika), the lines are well done and the simple shadows bring out the details... i dont really know what else to say beacuse its rather creappy

[The remake trio]

euagh... Proportions people!!!

right lets start from left to right seen as these reviews are ment to help you improve... *Khori - legs are tiny and have no realistic bending... they look like bendy rubber legs, make them wider and more pronouned, face looks flat beacuse her left eye is to far to the right and should be further to the left *plus* mabey a tad bigger...* *Anne - similar to Khori on the leg front... but they arnt as bad, they look thin compaired to a style of art...* *Nicole - the only one that seems in proportion... (apart from her right leg) which seems to thin again... work on the hands a bit more as well... they are one of the hardest things to get right... also her head looks massive, her hair shouldnt be that far up* shading isnt bad, simple 3/4 tone is good with well placed highlights... try to get some pratice drawing the body parts in motion or just try alot of different poses to prefect the art of the body before detailing them...

[unfinished final piece]

i have to agree with the others...

From what is finished it looks Great!... but as it stands its nothing more then a large white space with some block colours where you havent done the detail yet... i would recommend finishing something before submitting it to the art portal...

please work on something untill you think it is finish, otherwise we can not comment on something which we cant see...