yeah you already know what im going to say...
the lines are wobbly and should need neatening up... if you already knew this why didnt you do it?... you then wouldnt get replys saying they are... apart from the freehand lines her hair seems to be at the wrong angle... the back should be mroe to the right of the picture to be in keep with her face angle...
doing flash?... making a moive or a game?... if a moive i recomend keeping the anime style as thats what your work is mostly like from what you have shown us... do a indepth story of a few people on a journy... or a game?... the possiblites are endless... just try and find something you enjoy and stick with it... do what you want to do... and dont feel you need to do things to please others unless that is your goal.. 7/10