WOOO WOO WOOO!
Hell yeah... now thats what i call Bizarro style... fantastic pixel styled background with them smoooth curves and lines... athough im pritty sure i have seen the linework for this picture before... hmmm... anyway... lovely job mel :D 10/10
Yes, like I said in the description I just coloured one of his posted sketches, with his consent. I hope he likes it! xD
hpmm...
very cool and uber stylish... but seriously... it justs seems to painfull and cringe worthy when i look at it... love the style still... think its fantastic... love the shine on the sword handel... overall... i cant see any flaws in your design... and the colours just complete it... fantastic!
REGORASSU... TEMEE... ARIGATO...
(thank you very much, Lego! she's using the blunt side, you know.)
lovely... few things
right a few things to point out... the skin is lovely... the tones are fab and i think you shouldnt change anything... apart from...
posibly tone down the earing as they seem rather bright (fake) , make that thing around her neck fit better... possibly some shading under it so it doesnt look like it was put ontop of it... along with some shadows under her head *on the neck* put in her missing arm, and on her arm make the pink/white tone go alot darker towards her side as its to bright *like you did further down her arm* but do it all the way up to where you started doing it again :P... its like you forgot to do it... i like the shine effect but the whole body could use with the lines smoothing up alot, like the lines with gold in on her brest as well as other places... the hair is flawlessly done and i love the face... fantastic for your 5th try!!!...
hmm thanks thats really good advice...will keep in mind for future stuff, yeah I admit I did get lazy once I got to the body lol...who knew my eye would start bleeding at 3am :D
funny :D
beacuse mel is taller then you :P... joking aside... simple and light hearted comic for a small giggle... not the best artwork in the world but hey... its just a comic page :D... dont really know what else to say... the artwork is fine, nothing wrong at all... love that babys face to start with... got them big blue cute eyes of cuteness going on there... i like it... :3
lol! Gaaah. I KNEW I should have drawn Mel as a midget. D:
I swear, she's only like a centimetre taller!
Haha thanks for the review, man. XD
i like how...
you seem to be adding more detail to them... i know these are just sketches and rough ideas but the pace in which you churn these babys out is outstanding!!!... you have really good art style and i wouldnt want you to change it unless your were adapting to it... they are dynamic critters, sometimes i feel that the triangle shapes used are really harsh for some of your pictures... for example the girl with the gun has a really pointy arm and it just looks odd with that little joining bit... where as the other girl is more curvy and flowing... im not saying its bad... its a cool way of using the same idea but to make two different people stand out more... the guy at the top just looks like he has a massive head... still kinda funky... but not keen on the Z shaped arm...
just a few of my thoughts... keep it up :3
I liked the way that arm looked, I felt that straight lines added to the action line (How was it... "Fat Powerpuff meets triangles"... HAHAHAHAA!). Not so fond of the arm of the bimbo gal... It was really improvised and it looks somewhat clunky shaped... I wanted to look how would adding a little flesh at base of it would look and I didn't make it really good...
Well, that guy, the "Fallout Fighter"... I was really satisfied with that. I liked that crease on his sleeve... It the kind of simple solution I'm trying to research to add to my style.
Woo, Now I'm tired. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me, It's good to know different points of view. 'Till next time!
agree with shadman
right here comes the crit review... :D...
as always... lovely lines again... fantastic detail and great realistic proportions with a hint of anime poured over it... background is clean and fitting... i feel the writing *cutey honey* is hand done *as it most likey is... but it really needs to have smoother edges on it as it doesnt seem to fit in with the smoothness of the picture nor the background... you lose some of the linework *backlines* in the middle top of her chest heart... her elbows seem really odd... i dont know if its beacuse they are "scruffy" but some neatening up wouldnt hurt... lovely way of removing the hands :D... HER right leg seems alot thinner then her left leg.. love the lighting from behind shading on her legs and the realistic shine on her costume... one thing bothers me... the lower heart doesnt join up in the same place as the other side... and seems to stand out alot as it doesnt quite fit in with the rest of her costume... apart from a few issues... i couldnt really find anything else wrong with it... its lovely... :D
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