LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[what's her name?]

Really like this...

starting with the background... the theme and idea is fantasticly well done... i love how the honeycomb shape blends in... as for the girl... i cant recall what game she is from... but the linework is so sleek and flawless... the colours are flawlessly well done... you got the shine effects spot, and the shading is awsome!, and just to show off you went and did some glass as well... glass is one of them really hard things to make look right... and you got it in one... just a few things however... i feel that her eyes are slightly cross eyed.. and the shading might be a tad out on her right eye.. also the antenna nearest the crown might look better if it was moved to the other side to mimic the other one... i hope that makes sence... theres some little bits and pieces that could use with some tidying up... but overall... a fantastic piece!

[BizarroGirl]

WOOO WOO WOOO!

Hell yeah... now thats what i call Bizarro style... fantastic pixel styled background with them smoooth curves and lines... athough im pritty sure i have seen the linework for this picture before... hmmm... anyway... lovely job mel :D 10/10

purefey responds:

Yes, like I said in the description I just coloured one of his posted sketches, with his consent. I hope he likes it! xD

[Yamato Nadeshiko]

hpmm...

very cool and uber stylish... but seriously... it justs seems to painfull and cringe worthy when i look at it... love the style still... think its fantastic... love the shine on the sword handel... overall... i cant see any flaws in your design... and the colours just complete it... fantastic!

BizarroJoe responds:

REGORASSU... TEMEE... ARIGATO...
(thank you very much, Lego! she's using the blunt side, you know.)

[Sunny]

lovely... few things

right a few things to point out... the skin is lovely... the tones are fab and i think you shouldnt change anything... apart from...

posibly tone down the earing as they seem rather bright (fake) , make that thing around her neck fit better... possibly some shading under it so it doesnt look like it was put ontop of it... along with some shadows under her head *on the neck* put in her missing arm, and on her arm make the pink/white tone go alot darker towards her side as its to bright *like you did further down her arm* but do it all the way up to where you started doing it again :P... its like you forgot to do it... i like the shine effect but the whole body could use with the lines smoothing up alot, like the lines with gold in on her brest as well as other places... the hair is flawlessly done and i love the face... fantastic for your 5th try!!!...

SunnyRays responds:

hmm thanks thats really good advice...will keep in mind for future stuff, yeah I admit I did get lazy once I got to the body lol...who knew my eye would start bleeding at 3am :D

[Babies Hate Ugly People]

funny :D

beacuse mel is taller then you :P... joking aside... simple and light hearted comic for a small giggle... not the best artwork in the world but hey... its just a comic page :D... dont really know what else to say... the artwork is fine, nothing wrong at all... love that babys face to start with... got them big blue cute eyes of cuteness going on there... i like it... :3

Sabtastic responds:

lol! Gaaah. I KNEW I should have drawn Mel as a midget. D:
I swear, she's only like a centimetre taller!

Haha thanks for the review, man. XD

[Late year draughts & thoughts]

i like how...

you seem to be adding more detail to them... i know these are just sketches and rough ideas but the pace in which you churn these babys out is outstanding!!!... you have really good art style and i wouldnt want you to change it unless your were adapting to it... they are dynamic critters, sometimes i feel that the triangle shapes used are really harsh for some of your pictures... for example the girl with the gun has a really pointy arm and it just looks odd with that little joining bit... where as the other girl is more curvy and flowing... im not saying its bad... its a cool way of using the same idea but to make two different people stand out more... the guy at the top just looks like he has a massive head... still kinda funky... but not keen on the Z shaped arm...

just a few of my thoughts... keep it up :3

BizarroJoe responds:

I liked the way that arm looked, I felt that straight lines added to the action line (How was it... "Fat Powerpuff meets triangles"... HAHAHAHAA!). Not so fond of the arm of the bimbo gal... It was really improvised and it looks somewhat clunky shaped... I wanted to look how would adding a little flesh at base of it would look and I didn't make it really good...
Well, that guy, the "Fallout Fighter"... I was really satisfied with that. I liked that crease on his sleeve... It the kind of simple solution I'm trying to research to add to my style.

Woo, Now I'm tired. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me, It's good to know different points of view. 'Till next time!