not bad for a speed paint
the face is very well done for a timed piece... however the rest really shows how much of your time you spent on it... the body is very strange... almost hunch backed, twisted and warped... doesnt really have much distinction to it... its like a large block, the spikes on the shoulder look like some sort of bad welder put it together... i would really like to this this redone and touched up... it has potentional but in its current state its not great...
Hey, thanks for the critique! It's tough writing a critical review providing helpful things for an artist to work on, but you've given me plenty to think about and apply to future pieces.
Thanks again!
love the colours...
fine shading and rather simple lines... love the tiny details on this and the work on the face... i really like how the background is made to look like and edge of a table or chair of somesort... i would say neaten up the lines as they are slighly wobbly and touch up the shade a bit to be a tad stronger... a really nice starter piece
Yeah, I drew this back when I still had my really really crappy tablet, so I'm not happy at all with the line work.
Loved this one Vortex
apart from the blaten fact that they are about to pop out... i really like how you draw and detail all your work... the lines are simple and fine and the shading is just perfect!!!... and with the background echoing the main feature its just a perfect example of what you can do :3... once again im not keen on the eyes, i feel they seem out of place slightly... but thats mostly me... however this time they dont seem so bright compaired to the rest as its very brightly coloured and toned... 9/10
Whats going to be awesome is when I finish the games and animations with this level of work O_O! She was supposed to be looking down at *ahem* her assets, but it's difficult for me to draw this and have it look 100% correct. Maybe I will master it later when I can get a chance. Thx for the review!
another geat one here...
i was scrolling down to read your comments and i could of sweared it moved... slightly shocked i scroll up and wait... smooth :3... very fluient and very well done, love how all the lines in this one are roughly the same so areas dont fell out of place... the exspresion is spot on and the whole pose it well thought out... another great example of what you are capable off... 9/10!
Haha, maybe you thought you were losing it at last! I wanted people to react like that... "Hmm... a cute schoolgirl... Waitaminute, she BLINKED?!!"
Sadly, that's one of the few animation tricks I'm capable of...
I'm glad you liked it.
loving the style... few things wrong
photo copy of some sort?... anway... her thumb is tiny... theres not much picture to work of, and from what i can see shows good anime style... i feel that theres not enough picture of quality in this picture to give it anything over a 5/10, work on getting the sizes right of her fingers and thumbs and try again...
hey thanks a bunch ! it's an older picture, originally it was colored in pencil. I put this one up cause i want to make another in pencil sooo that thumb will be fixed and there'll be more to see, in time haha :]
nice lines here...
right lets see what could be improved... i feel the neck is either to long or the headis to far forwards... the arms look great but i think her left arm is slightly longer... apart from them two things i love the rest of it... the light shading and detail is very well done and correct, i feel if you went over it making all the lines the same strength it would be fantastic... no need to colour everything you do... its nice to see some linework now and again... :3
I think I was in middle school when I drew this... If were to meet you a lot sooner this art work would improve a lot more... But, since it's an old pic I'm never going to retouch it... But, thank you! You give out really good advice!
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