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[Starcraft Ghost: Fan Art]

some one say starcraft!?

nice work on this one... whats it done with? penicle and charcoal?
anway... like the zerg touches on this one.... the female ghost is very well done and highly detailed... i feel areas in the background have been neglected and your main time was spent on the girl... for example... the wire/cable along the floor isnt great nor well shaded... love how you did the cloaking effect... overall a good job... just needs tiny adjustments to be perfect

Xionscar responds:

Thanks!!

You're totally right.. This needs to be cleaned up a bit, and detailed in certain areas!
I'm not sure I'll go back over this one though... I've since learned how to set pictures up for painting and this would be a pain in the rump, to say the least.

In that, I mean, I don't do as much graphite work these days... mainly focus on digital paintings... :D

[Tara Rose II]

not bad for a speed paint

the face is very well done for a timed piece... however the rest really shows how much of your time you spent on it... the body is very strange... almost hunch backed, twisted and warped... doesnt really have much distinction to it... its like a large block, the spikes on the shoulder look like some sort of bad welder put it together... i would really like to this this redone and touched up... it has potentional but in its current state its not great...

mrbob0822 responds:

Hey, thanks for the critique! It's tough writing a critical review providing helpful things for an artist to work on, but you've given me plenty to think about and apply to future pieces.

Thanks again!

[Ginger]

love the colours...

fine shading and rather simple lines... love the tiny details on this and the work on the face... i really like how the background is made to look like and edge of a table or chair of somesort... i would say neaten up the lines as they are slighly wobbly and touch up the shade a bit to be a tad stronger... a really nice starter piece

MattakuShinzu responds:

Yeah, I drew this back when I still had my really really crappy tablet, so I'm not happy at all with the line work.

[Suida]

Loved this one Vortex

apart from the blaten fact that they are about to pop out... i really like how you draw and detail all your work... the lines are simple and fine and the shading is just perfect!!!... and with the background echoing the main feature its just a perfect example of what you can do :3... once again im not keen on the eyes, i feel they seem out of place slightly... but thats mostly me... however this time they dont seem so bright compaired to the rest as its very brightly coloured and toned... 9/10

Vortex00 responds:

Whats going to be awesome is when I finish the games and animations with this level of work O_O! She was supposed to be looking down at *ahem* her assets, but it's difficult for me to draw this and have it look 100% correct. Maybe I will master it later when I can get a chance. Thx for the review!

[Teacher's Pet]

another geat one here...

i was scrolling down to read your comments and i could of sweared it moved... slightly shocked i scroll up and wait... smooth :3... very fluient and very well done, love how all the lines in this one are roughly the same so areas dont fell out of place... the exspresion is spot on and the whole pose it well thought out... another great example of what you are capable off... 9/10!

BizarroJoe responds:

Haha, maybe you thought you were losing it at last! I wanted people to react like that... "Hmm... a cute schoolgirl... Waitaminute, she BLINKED?!!"
Sadly, that's one of the few animation tricks I'm capable of...
I'm glad you liked it.

[butterfly]

loving the style... few things wrong

photo copy of some sort?... anway... her thumb is tiny... theres not much picture to work of, and from what i can see shows good anime style... i feel that theres not enough picture of quality in this picture to give it anything over a 5/10, work on getting the sizes right of her fingers and thumbs and try again...

reckoner responds:

hey thanks a bunch ! it's an older picture, originally it was colored in pencil. I put this one up cause i want to make another in pencil sooo that thumb will be fixed and there'll be more to see, in time haha :]