LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Late year draughts & thoughts]

i like how...

you seem to be adding more detail to them... i know these are just sketches and rough ideas but the pace in which you churn these babys out is outstanding!!!... you have really good art style and i wouldnt want you to change it unless your were adapting to it... they are dynamic critters, sometimes i feel that the triangle shapes used are really harsh for some of your pictures... for example the girl with the gun has a really pointy arm and it just looks odd with that little joining bit... where as the other girl is more curvy and flowing... im not saying its bad... its a cool way of using the same idea but to make two different people stand out more... the guy at the top just looks like he has a massive head... still kinda funky... but not keen on the Z shaped arm...

just a few of my thoughts... keep it up :3

BizarroJoe responds:

I liked the way that arm looked, I felt that straight lines added to the action line (How was it... "Fat Powerpuff meets triangles"... HAHAHAHAA!). Not so fond of the arm of the bimbo gal... It was really improvised and it looks somewhat clunky shaped... I wanted to look how would adding a little flesh at base of it would look and I didn't make it really good...
Well, that guy, the "Fallout Fighter"... I was really satisfied with that. I liked that crease on his sleeve... It the kind of simple solution I'm trying to research to add to my style.

Woo, Now I'm tired. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me, It's good to know different points of view. 'Till next time!

[Level 36]

Outstanding work

the linework is flawlessly done, the colours are neutral and earthy... lovely palet of colours indeed... all the details... DETAILS! are bloody fan-saba-tastic!!! the amount of pure awsomeness just oozes from this piece... theres is however a few minior things such as dodgy shading here and there... but the mud/paint effects on the skin as well as a large amount of the colouring just blows away most of the artwork i have seen...

ok so wheres these minor issues?... well lets start with the boots... theres a bit of white peeping through, the colours arnt constantly blended, theres areas which are next to large big strokes of blocked colour, "scribbly colouring in" on her left ankel, the shading on the leg seems a tad rushed and could use with a bit of neatening up... you seem to loose that black line in the belt without any colour issues so its rather odd... like you have coloured over the linework... feathers and beads nicely done, not sure on the shading on her hand holding the axe as its rather harsh *i understand thats from putting her war paint on but it would go around her palm and not suddleny stop abruptly*, possbly more detail on the wooden handel of the axe and neatening up of the fur so the white underlay is either blured into the background or removed, some lovely detailing on the fur and face work is lovely along with everything else... seems like you worked down the picture and your work and got a bit sloppy due to the fact that you thought that theses areas wouldnt get looked in as much detail or just lost focus and interest...

the background is simple and crisp... lovely use of colours and artist style to block it off like that to the top with a white underlay... athough similar effect with sloppyness at the bottom with the colouring in as there are areas which seem to be lacking the quality of the rest of the piece... really like the way you constructed the trees as i find it highly realistic and artistic...

i hope you find my review of great use and not just someone who just finds flaws in it... you have fantastic potential *if not already great potentail!* but just need to tidy things up in my view... 10/10 for the quality of work as always at its truely remarkable to view!... look forward to more of your fantastic art prodects and flashes in both the art and flash portal in the very near future!!!...

i hope you never stop drawing as you are truely a master of the arts...

-legolaSS

Sabtastic responds:

You totally called me on a ton of your points there! XD haha
I know you said that the point of your review wasn't to find flaws, but let's just say I agree with everything, and now I want to edit the hell out of it! x3

Thanks, as uaual for the great review, man! :)
I really appreciate it!

[Yosatsu Wallpaper]

totaly kickass!

i kinda feel im rating 10/10 due to the person as well as the artwork... beacuse the artwork isnt the best... but i totaly love the comic style along with the anime feel... some things that slightly bother me... the arm looks a tad beefy i feel... some more shading in places would be nice n stuff... but hey its an old piece of work... you have improved leaps and bounds since then!... and it really shows... great to see some earlyer work from you!...

-LegolaSS

BizarroJoe responds:

You're way too much generous...!!!
I must admit I was curious about the reaction of people that only know me for the Art Portal... They could flip out.

[Yoko Pinup]

how did i miss this for so long!?!

another wonderfull work... not sure about the angle of the legs and feet as they look slightly akward... but has your great style and colouring... 10/10!

Sabtastic responds:

lol Well I'm glad you found it! XD
Thanks, as usual. :)

[Waiting]

lovely work again...

theres a few issues i can see... for example... the hair on her shoulder looks really flat... theres no shading or any sort of lighting/shading to show depth... i like how you faded out the hands so you dont seem them as clearly... they look really good from what i can make out... the skin texture again is flawless and perefect... how long did it take you to do this one?... you normaly say how long they take... anway... great piece of artwork... :3

Geneticeye responds:

i did this piece over 3 month with about 40 hours work, i had done a different background before but i didnt like it so it took longer :)

[Annika]

FANTASTIC!

the lighting, the colours the linework... all brillant!

if you were to change anything... i would say that the tree's leaves start to far down... and thats about it... its a flawless piece of work... im sure theres minior issues with it if you look really closely but on the whole a lovely piece of work... top marks and favourted...

AlvinHew responds:

Thank you. It's encouraging to get sincere comments like these.

[OUCH!]

you style is starting to...

look alot like gonzo's... the way you colour it and use your lines... but hey, it fantasticly *cute*... poor little guy... nice artwork!... i take it your not using flash anymore to get that amount of blending... i feel the wound and belt area could use with a bit of work... but it looks great... nice one :)... Ciao

JKAmovies responds:

I'm taking that my art looks a little like Gonzo's is a complement, Thanks.

I'm kinda bored of flash now. . . I've used it to draw for years. . . It's time for something new :D

Not saying that I've given up on flash, just taking a little brake and trying something different, and I'll tell ya. . . I'm having soo much fun using photoshop :)