LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Year of the Rabbit Ears]

cute and catchy

the skillful use of dot shading and expert line work makes this stand out from the rest... nicely done, although you might want to adjust his arm a little as it seems far to thin compared to the upper part... but that might just be me :D... 9.5/10

[Daisy]

pixel art...

Something you do VERY well... i am amazed at how much colors you have put into this... just a few things with this... if her leg is bent but the other one not... then they shouldn't meet together at the bottom... he head seems a tiny bit big... don't know if its because of the hair... either way... i am glad you finished this one! :D

[NG Elite Soldier]

loving the texture...

fab entery for the contest... i love how you got the cloth texture nearly everywhere... i really think it looks cute but with all the gear makes it badass... the thing that puts me off is the eyes... everywhere else is detailed and textured... but the eyes just seem rather bland... try adding some sort of highlights to it to make them look like buttons or something along the lines of that... apart from that... fab!

3D-xelu responds:

good idea but i'm not sure if i'm allowed to edit the entry.. and if i am... i'm too lazy to do it XD

i wanted the eyes to be cartoony... if they looked realistic they mights not... blend

[Year Of The Cat.]

a few pointers...

nice picture... but just a few things to keep in mind... the size and perspective... also the cat seems a tad strange... the trees on the left are larger then the trees on the right... and flow off nicely into the distance... but in the background you have these building which are atleast 10 times the size of the trees with massive windows... and half the size of that moutain on the left... i really like how you have done the plants in the foreground... but i feel that the depth of this picture is all over the place... try to make future pictures more defined before adding colours and details...

[Year Of The Rabbit.]

to simple and washy...

the idea is fine, but everything seems very washy, its very hard to see whats going on... ok theres a rabbit... might want to spend a bit looking at pictures of rabbits to get the shape a bit more correct... as for the background.. what am i looking at?... moutains next to a lake covered in mist?, floating rocks in the clouds?... or even tree's?... you need to define things better and add more detailed lines to show this...

[see me trolling]

trolling :3

great stuff jouste... loving your style... its great to see your art poping up now and again... and this is another quality work... i really like the green's in this picture... like the splashing/spray/fire at the bottom of the picture... and from its mouth... i really like the effect the simple layer of green tint over the rock has, as well as the red one on the club... if not dramaticly oversized :P... keep up the fab work, and looking forward to the next... 10/10 of course :3

jouste responds:

wow thatnks for the long review!

i shall totally get on my next project and i'm really happy you stopped by and dropped some comments on this one!

*highfives*

[new x-23]

nicely done...

just a few pointers... i think the face and hair is perfectly done... but i feel that the image could use a bit of neatening up... for example the refection of the shoes in the blood should be crisper?, and also a defined line where the shoe ends and the blood begins... just my views on this piece...