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[Halo Nerds ep. 3 Part 2]

Sorry guys but its a rip off...

i dont know if you have seen red vs blue... beacuse this is sooooo similar, its basicly a rip off, in red vs blue you have a red team... and a blue team... and in the first episode... one team spys on the other, it was sooo much like this, sure there was some stuff in here but i just found so much stuff similar... for example, there was a spanish guy, and in RvB they have a spanish robot guy, honestly, no offence but i just thought i was a total rip off, apart from that, the graphics could be cranked up a little for example the warthog looked rushed, i gave a 1 for style beacuse i basicly saw it all before, the sound was pritty good quality athough it did have small glitchs within the moive, as the violence went... well seen a guy disapear in an explosion, a heavy object getting throw at the pink guys and a guy falling from a rock to the head... was a far as it went... 3 for interactivity... beacuse i got to chose where to go and a 2 for humor seen as it wasnt funny beacus of so many of the RvB qoutes where used, overall you put effort into it, and it shows but think more origenal and make sure that what you are doing isnt going to look like anything else... sorry but thats how i saw it...

LegolaSS - NitroKitty Productions

[CS-VS-Starcraft]

a all audio flash which isnt even your audio!

im sorry but come on... you could of least added some pictures in or somthing... you dint make thisyou just ripped it of someone elses... i have the same audio its everywhere... so dont tell me you made it coz you dint... gooday to you sir..

[A Generic Happy Christmas]

You know when it sucks...

beaucse you have to write what the pictures are...

maltratikar responds:

omfg ur ghey an i hat u lotz lololololololo

[The Dudette Next Door]

LOL, I loved the Tibirn sun logo in the credits.

i had a smile on my face all the way through that, and i just bust out laughing when they kisses, i couldnt belive it, good work, athough they did see to look the same all the way throught the moive, and the sound could use some inprovement, but apart from that, not bad... not bad at all

[TR1 - Trailer]

NOO!, dont ever do stick men again!

it was great, it was well drawn, good atmosphere, and then u go and spoil it by adding in stick people fighting, NOOOOOOO dont do it!, it ruined it, honestly, if u just had a few short shots of them fighting or somthing it would have been a lot better and have gotten better review.... NOO STICK PEOPLE!!!, if you chose not to take this advice from a regular newgrounds blammer, then your moive will lack the quality it requires to get high marks from viewers, also even if you dont like it, you should try to add in some fbf only if its 3 different frames like a guy turning or somthing in the same graphics, it would be alot better then a 2 min stick animtion, you must think about quality and not so much about quanity, honesty who wants to see a 5 hour stick moive when u can watch a 5 second proper flash moive, anway i hope you think about this before you sumbmit any more sticks... anyway apart from that its fairly good, you could use with a bit more animtion and try not to repeat the same symbols over and over again, *it gets quite boring* (yeah i seen that before, show me somthing new and exticing) sort of feel, and the menu was a nice touch...

LegolaSS (-=NitroKitty Productions=-)

[No Man's Land Flash Anime]

Very good work, lots of time put into it but...

the only things i could say to inprove on is the gif loops do not match back up, like where his at the door his hair quickly repeats back from the start, the same with his cloak, the crow was ok thou, also the sound could use a touch more work on, apart from that not bad, not bad at all

[Hand of Tangreal Ep Zero]

Intressting...

ok Lecca, may i point out that when she walks its more then just 3 or 4 frames, anway the graphics wheren't bad, but could be inproved, i recomend you spend alot more time on the animtion beausce it looked wierd, the sceen inwhich she was "walking" the floor did not move so it looked akward, also where the otter looking creature is stood on the background is not complete, i also recomend you work at a slightly higher frame rate beaucse it will make it smoother, athough it dose require more work, also somthing which i found quite amusing is that its called Hand of tangreal, but where she flicks her hair back she dosent have any hands, also when shes "running" the background trees move the same speed as the bushes infront of them, this is wrong the trees should move slower then the bushes beaucse of perspective, i know this is only your sketched piece of work, but im just telling you how you could inprove it, but from what im seeing its fairly good... athough im not sure this will get into the portal, but good luck with future animtions... and one last thing, i really like the picture of the girl above the play button but in the moive she dosent look the same i think it could be somthing to do with the eyes... away way good luck in future animtions

-LegolaSS- (NitroKitty Productions)

Lecca responds:

Thank you very much for the reveiw.
Yes, as you've noticed, I didn't spend much time on this. I had a week of class time to make it. So it didn't turn out that good. And guess what. you're probably the first person to get the pun "Hand of Tangreal" Although, sadly. The main character "Lecca" was supposed to have her hand in this animation (Something's gone wrong with my movie clip and it's disappeared) Although in the series she does not!

Oh. And the picture of the girl above the play button I actually took from from the first episode from the series. Which is almost finished, and is a MUCH higher quality (as in my drawing quality) then this. Thank you so very much for your nice reveiw.

[Black Knights Episode 1]

Its like u read my mind...

as i was watching this i saw many problems, such as if a guard sees 3 knights on horse back, hows he know that the castle is underattack, also i was thinking how was they ment to attack a town with some... "magical" powers, and why dint they just shoot him, and u anwsered them all during the moive, it was quite strange to think... "oh he got an arrow, why dont u shoot him with lots more" and a split second later *fire!*.... its really well made and i hope to see more in this "tale", good work Ron White

[Ambush!]

Very nice animtion

this was a very well done piece of work, it shows that a lot of hard work has been put into this creation, i enjoyed watching everymoment, and loved your style of animtion, 5/5