LegolaSS's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Left 4 Speed]

Nice

Pritty cool ideas, love the animation, graphics were good along with the exelent sound quality, couldnt see any flaws in it, made me laugh out loud at bits and loved the ending... Great job. really it was great... mabey a tad longer?... other then that... flawless!.. chow

-legolaSS [NitroKitty Proudctions]

[L4D Short: The Witch]

Short Clean and funny

Bravo! A very smooth animation, simple graphics which captured the charters perfectly including the witch with an anime feel to it, as you said the back ground graphics could use a bit of work but other then that it got your funny point across.

If only they did that in-game

-LegolaSS [Nitro kitten productions]

[Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)]

4 years of waiting!

I rember back when the alpha was posted and the sneak preview was released, it wasnt as i thought it would be like, it was more real, its slightly scary that this all might actuly happen in the near future!, not only were the graphs nicely done, the mix of flash work, 3d rendering, explosions and sound were amazingly mixed together to create a visual feast for the eyes and ears, a few points i overlooked "might be beacuse of my flash version" but there were some white lines on the right hand side of each moive during the "film" i hope to see more and hope to see the improvement continue throughout all the rest of your flashes...

-LegolaSS

[The One Layer Collab]

Not on one layer

quiet frankly saying they are all on one layer when blantenly they are not...
you could argue that they ar symbols on one layer, quiet frankly im giving it a 0 beacuse its faulse...

i see what you mean by one layer but i was hoping for something more... and all the things i saw was neather new... or intressting...

[The Burly-Brawl Ep1]

Basicly a trailer

ok first of all, it had a nice dramatic bulid up, was a bit long for me but thats just me, once again more stick figures (reminds me of zoe zombie) i know they are easy to draw / animate but you need to progress your skills as a flash artist and animator, apart from those points which i have already said, the animation quality was smooth and flowing, the effects needed a touch of improving but were good, the rendering was fair, nothing special from the moive you have sent... i felt it was more of a trailer, overall nothing new or intressting, but i would like to see more work from you.

please see this as a encouragement to prouduce better work in the future.

LegolaSS - [NitroKitty Productions]

[Shattered Heaven Trailer]

Right

Ok first things first...

the concept of giant robots battling it out seems all to familiar... but putting that aside, the music went well with the theme, I enjoyed the into, setting the seen very well... however you must look at it from a viewers point of view, I don't know what you are talking about when you abbreviate words... meka and machine are words I understand, I know this may be a minor thing but its tucking up the movie that makes it all better, I can see a lot of thought went into this as you are going to make a full length flash

I am never keen on "trailers" for I believe they should not be in the portal, only finished products, thus why there is an alpha space...

the graphics where reasonable, (the anime genera), over use of same symbols stands out, the movement seemed rather two stroke you need to add more frames in the animation on the humans, the robots were done nicely but again they need to be neatened up a lot of ruff edges.
try not to prolong panning *there was a point where the girl was standing facing the wind (there was no animation on the girl/man or grass) and it panned down to the man, it seemed like a long time even if it was not.*

do not think this as been harsh but if I replied like everyone else saying it was fantastic and great, you would not improve it and carry one to make a mundane flash, I think you could do a lot better if you spent more time on it and not trying to get as much done as you can in a short time period...

Work that bit harder, do that extra few fames, make it quicker in places and neaten the whole thing up, let friends or family watch it to show weak points in the movie and then redo parts...

I hope to see future flash animations from you...

legolaSS - [Nitro kitten productions]

AdamTilford responds:

Appreciate it. I'm still getting used to animating in flash so naturally there's going to be a lot of things that need to be worked on.

Yeah thought went in, but only because this movie is based off of novels I've already written. 3 completed, the 4th almost done, and the 1st in the process of publishing. I did tons of art for it, I am releasing an event compilation book featuring all the major scenes in the first 3 painted out. I've just put off doing animation for a long time.

The end scene will have their hair blowing and such, honestly, it was 2 am and I wanted to put up the entire thing. I will update the movie once I make that adjustment.

So yeah, I appreciate it, you can't get better if everyone says it's great already.

[World of magic part 2]

needs some work

ok, dont think im harsh for voting low, im just trying to make sure everyone improves on their work, first of all iv just had a quick look over your other works and i think i can saftly say... this was kinda based on hellsing, the eyes ect... apart from that you need to improve on the overall construction of the moive, there was a few times when loops did not repeat properly and small things like that, try to make the people more refinded instead of changing the quality of them every five seconds, try to keep them constant otherwise it gets quite confusing, on that note, making lots of things happing at once is good for small parts but having it contantly doing it is very confusing, i think alot of people will say they had no idea what was going on, graphics needs some work, im not saying its rubbish or anything, just improve in that area, style is a bit "iv just watched hellsing and want to make a flash" so try to create your own, sound quality is good nothing to add there, violence if you wanted some might have been a bit more understandable then randomised attacking, interactivity speaks for its self and i found nothing humorus... overall it needs some work, i il look forward to seeing later flash animations from you.

-LegolaSS- [Nitrokitty productions]

[The Digital Competition]

BUT!...

Out of the two... which is the cheapest?... which is the easyer to get hold of... overall apart from the marketing and sales of the hard drive go... the flash was pritty good... just need to make the background a tiny bit bigger in some of the shots when you "shake" it beacuse you can see white.... apart from that and the major fact that your trying to avdertise this hard drive... its pritty good...

legolass - [Nitrokitty]... chow...

[FPS In Real Life]

I thought it was amusing

first of, "im not that type of guard"... come on you cant even aford shoes!!!, what type of agency has guards with no shoes, i liked it how the guards stood their when you took out the gun, the knive was weird beacuse you dint actuly throw it, poor guy under the pool table was still alive... nice touch with the save screen, but over all i think it could have been alot longer for was it was and more effects mabey?... i duno, but over all it was good... chow...

-LegolaSS- [Nitro Kitty]