ah so your not dead :P
you really need to pick up the pace, it was like watching it in slow motion, i think you could have really speeded things up ALOT... some nice graphics and some understanding about the story... but its major downside is how long it takes to get through the story...
i think alot of people will comment on how slow it runs as well... i dont know if its just my computer but it felt like an age for things to get moving "story wise and animation".... athough there wasnt really that much of a story so far anway... looking forward to what else you do... but thats my major problem with it... "make it move quicker and smoother!"