LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skimpy Commission]

lovely face... lack of clothes... perfect?

well no... i think the lack of clothes looks silly... no normal woman would wear that... anway... love the shading and colours on the hair, the line art is yet again wonderfull everything looks in proportion with the angles they are at... love the shading on the skin to give it more depth along with the fade out of her left leg... i would like to see another one of theses but her with detailed clothes on and without the commission writen all over it... i understand its for someone but its just seems a bit pointless submitting it to the portal like that... i hope you understand where im coming from, i really like this anime sort of style you have... keep up the good work...

[Nothing But A Monster]

saw this in the art fourms...

and i told you how much i loved it...

the whole meaning behind it gives you a real understanding of the piece... its more indepth then you would think... the whole idea is wonderfull and the finished product is amazing...

[SHIRA - REQUEST]

yeah you already know what im going to say...

the lines are wobbly and should need neatening up... if you already knew this why didnt you do it?... you then wouldnt get replys saying they are... apart from the freehand lines her hair seems to be at the wrong angle... the back should be mroe to the right of the picture to be in keep with her face angle...

doing flash?... making a moive or a game?... if a moive i recomend keeping the anime style as thats what your work is mostly like from what you have shown us... do a indepth story of a few people on a journy... or a game?... the possiblites are endless... just try and find something you enjoy and stick with it... do what you want to do... and dont feel you need to do things to please others unless that is your goal.. 7/10

[Hoshi+Kasuka]

bit messy and unfinished?

not that im saying that a bad thing... just seems that it was a doodle and then coloured in... seen as they have VERY little clothes on il let you off with the lack of details and other stuff... like the tatto... i feel like theres alot of blank space again which should have been cut... like the hair and everyones limbs seem in proportion (i think)... would like to see one with more details and clothes... but theres nothing else i could see improving...

[now why'd cha do that!?]

bright light..

the light really kills of the linework to the right... unless there is some sort of background or reason for the light been there i wouldnt use it... alot of white space without using it artisticly... the stocking/socks shouldnt finish that way, they should be in keep with her legs curve not horizonal... her legs look strange but im going to put that down to the perspective of them... give her bolder features or more defined curves in places and you should find yourself better off... i understand this is your first try at this but please understand theres always improvement to make :3 half way there... 5

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

thanks for the help. I'll keep that all in mind next time <3

[Buxom Redhead]

very cartoon like

chunky and funky... love the colours on this even if they are outside of the lines (points to leg), im not liking the red gun as it looks like a water pistol been that bright red, her right leg is a tad odd and im pritty sure her foot shouldnt bend that way as well... overall do a neater job keep it either realistic cartoon or of the wall... try not to fall in the middle with a mix mash, other then that i rather like it... 8

[Model]

WOW stunningly perfect..

the lighting is by far the most wonderfull thing iv seen for a long time, the colours are sharp and bright and the design over the top is just full of artisticness... i love how it fades in and out over areas of the skin... im not to keen on where it goes onto the black background... sorts of loses the effect.... but non the less a great peice of artwork... top marks

[Angel Anime]

nice lines here...

right lets see what could be improved... i feel the neck is either to long or the headis to far forwards... the arms look great but i think her left arm is slightly longer... apart from them two things i love the rest of it... the light shading and detail is very well done and correct, i feel if you went over it making all the lines the same strength it would be fantastic... no need to colour everything you do... its nice to see some linework now and again... :3

bloominglove responds:

I think I was in middle school when I drew this... If were to meet you a lot sooner this art work would improve a lot more... But, since it's an old pic I'm never going to retouch it... But, thank you! You give out really good advice!

[Another Character]

very very good!

shading and just pure detail alone is worth viewing this... the amount of time it must have taken is truely shown... i love the ideas you have going on here and everything... wouldnt say its perfect but i would defenly want to see the coloured version...

[Rainbows on the Brain]

another great addition!

very bright this time round, not sure about her right arm, looks a bit thin compaired to her other one. but it could just be beacuse its covered up... face details are lovely as always and an overall nice look.. shading is good on the top abd love the details such as the bra strap (most people would forget this) but i feel that she is missing a music player... she just seems to have head phones on... 8/10

Mrew responds:

Wow.
I am such a dork.
Now that you mention it, I did forget the music player.
Fail. DX