LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bikini chick speedpaint]

woah, love the green tone

very artistic and sketchy / blocky but i love it... the overall shape and size of everything looks spot on... athough i feel her hand on her head seems to have sunk into her hair and apear to be coming out the other side... the green tone is lovley and the odd lighting in the picture is really well done... a really outstanding piece of work, if you were to spend a bit more time on it to neaten it up... refine the lines and blur in them shades... it would be wonderfull... but as it stands... its still amazing!

trueWolF responds:

Thanks, i was told the same thing by many others. this piece does have it's flaws.. it's a speed paint after all, and i'm not that good yet to get perfection in an hour n a half :D hopefully soon though with practice. but yeah, i was thinkin of fixing her up a bit, however i also feel like moving onto a couple of other pieces that i've been workin on for a month or so.

[Light The Hands]

small issue..

i really like this work, the chalk colours?.. simple and highly artistic piece... how ever, i feel that his finger *first finger* and thumb on his right hand is far to thin... they seem almost alien like... i dont know if this was done from a photo, but it could use with some beefing up... apart from that the lighting is well done and love the overall use of the tones... nice one ornery

ornery responds:

I knew i would be getting the thin finger critique. Whats hilarious is that my fingers are really really thin and look like that. Also the angle and lighting make it look even more exaggerated.

[Sig Pack 3]

please note...

this picture breaks the rules of newgrounds... as the pictures you are including are not your own... please keep this on your own personal profile and do not add to the portal as the images in your work are not your own... this also goes for sig pack 1 and 2... i hope you understand this warning and replace this artwork in your personal art area... thank you

*no stars beacuse this is only partly your work*

Marsupial responds:

erm so from now on i should submit these as scraps to my own profile? ok im only planning to do one more for now anyway.

and thanks for the favourite on bloodstorm

[-Bakuma-]

love the background

nice beefy black lines, detailed shading and simple features... however... i feel that its more of an animation picture then artwork.. it needs a better or more dynamtic angle... its rather plain and a bit boring... not much is going on.. also i feel that its been shaded oddly as im not sure where the light source is coming from... :S

JKAmovies responds:

I made it quite quickly, which may explain the plainness of it.

As for the shading, there is no real light source to it, I just added different shaded spots at random, and as I got bored of drawing this guy I ended up just coping the right arm and re-shaping it for the left arm.

This was more of a 'practice' drawing, with different techniques and shading.

But thank you for commenting :D

[Depressed Sisha]

getting better

your work is getting alot better from some of your earlyer posts... the 3 tones work really well and how you have done it is fantastic example of how single tones can give more deepth to something... im not sure on the screen as its just a print screen... very dynamic angle and well shaded...

[Robo Chick]

love the blue tones and simple lines...

but the problem with this is... the background... its far to colourfull for such a simplistic piece... its very chaotic and lots of colours and details... which is the oposite to the robotic girl... the picture feels slightly side heavy... i feel that you should make the girl the main feature of the piece and possibly enlarge the picture... the details are somewhat lost due to the size... try getting the background to aid the overall effect instead of disrupt it... make the art picture bigger so more details can be seen... i cant really comment on anything else apart from her ass is huge... but im putting that down to the angle shes at...

[Pensive]

a little to basic

ok... so this is what i think, the background is the only thing going for it seen as you want the forground been all black... if you want this style to work... your going to need to refine your black lines... they are VERY splogy and all over the place... you need to put alot more time and detail into them.... try to get as much detail as you can, your only working with one colour so it shouldnt be a ground breakingly hard task... now... for the background, i like the line effect and the colours... and thats about it... i feel you should have zoomed in with a smaller brush and did alot more detail then what you have done... like iv already said about 5 times... its the DETAIL that makes a piece like this... im sorry but this isnt good enough...

[Yoko]

ok ok... i get it

so far i have look through most of your work... and after some quick google checks and detailed studys i have come to the conclusion that non of your art is orginal... what i would like to say is... all your work is freehand copied *thus meaning you used a picture as a guide and drew it on another piece of paper*... i would like to see you draw some stuff that is your own style and things you can draw instead of blaten copies... as for this picture... i have seen the orginal and this is really bad... i mean, look at her head... just take a min to realise that its far to big and inflated... the details are nice but they where just copied from the orginal... i cant give you help if what your showing us is just your own copy of someone elses work... please do something orginal... il give you a 4/10.. why?... well -5 for a copy and -1 for a poor job of it... if you find it hard to create your own style or ideas... start will lots of doodles and work on the female form as this is somthing you are clearly intrested in... sketch out basic female bodys in different poses and then work on a style you feel can be achived... then add details ontop of them and even try colour if your up for it... but what your currently doing isnt going to improve your current skills unless you start to move away from it and start using your imagination... theres nothing wrong with using other work as insperation, but just copying it is out of the question... so i hope you read this and undestand what im asking you to do... im not forcing you to do anything im just trying to help you improve what your currently working on and hopefully you will like your ideas and improve the quality of artwork at the same time... thanks for reading this stupidly long review... but im trying to help you as you seem to grasp the basics... hope to see some orginal work from you soon... ciao

LeadSamurai responds:

wow bucko have the drawings iv done are of characters that already exist hince the wont be original anybody can realize that. What makes you so high and mighty, iI see something I like, I have to draw it, i also noticed you didnt comment on my orignal work...hmmmm. and some half witted response you wrote anit going to change much I like drawing pictures of my favorite anime characters is that really a problem.

[Mushroom City]

nice style

very cartoon like but at the same time... realistic... almost comic style... i would recommend paying attention in class and doing the proper work... as for the artwork.. the lines are very well done and smooth... shading is good in places where you havent smudged it by accident... would like to see you do some work on plain paper for a change... but the pen really picks out the details well... a good job!

Zepizza responds:

Yeah, well, there are obvious mistakes in that drawing, if you look closely to the "webs", you'll see that I haven't shaded around them, but since that was a "for fun" drawing, I kinda liked it.

I'm just finishing another "classtime" drawing and I think I'll do in a proper paper.
The pen isn't ballpoint pen, I don't know the name, but remembers a small and compact brush, it is really cool, it made the comic-like impression.

Thanks for the tips.

[Hot Bikini Biker Babe]

would love to see it finished...

the colours and shades on the girl are fab, i really love the strong contrast in colours here... feel that without the bike been finished its really letting the rest of the picture down... love the simple highlights on the metal... apart from really urging you to get this finished... there seems to be nothing wrong with any of the linework... well... that part of the bike infront of her leg looks slightly un alined but a simple buffing out of it would do the trick... it might already be correct but without it been finished i cant tell... so what are you waiting for?... lets see this finished!... done and dusted :3