LegolaSS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chrome]

lovely use of colors seen as its done by hand

OK, things that are annoying me, there's a white line top left... the clouds seem a silly shape and don't make any sense due to the nature of the black background with blue glowing floor plates, and the rabbits seem a bit random...

however, you have done a lovely job on the coloring aspect of things, the metallic effect is very nice indeed... might need to work on proportions as well as angles of things... like the wing on the right side of the picture, it doesn't seem to be the right angle, and the hand on the floor looks fat... good luck

[QUARANTINE]

so crazy colours!!!

loving the rustic look of it... my only down point is that it does seem rushed and messy... however that adds to the charter of the picture... nice start!... hope to see more impressive stuff from yourself in the near future!

[Wish You Were Here]

nice... clean and simple

smooth gradient shading, simple and effective detailed background... clean cut and delivered perfectly... well done aigis

[SEEK & DESTROY]

even in full screen

i couldn't understand what things where on the thing getting picked up?... you got the idea with the line work on the big robot... that makes sense... however i think you have got a bit sloppy in areas... i think even some basic shading with help this a lot and give you a better chance... because as it stands, its not a very strong piece

also looking at the score everyone else is giving you... this is give you a good idea where you stand in the whole scheme of things....

[Angry Scarecrow Robot]

no structure...

i feel that the space hasn't been used correctly... i dislike the puffs of smoke coming out of its nose as they look odd and random, the framework doesn't look like it would move as it doesn't have enough depth, the random wires make no sense nor does the holes in the side of the head... now... your shading is whats keeping this whole thing together as such... your showing us that you know how to add depth and texture... iv seen your other work and feel that this is a poor example of what you can do...

[AVAT round 1 - deadly robot]

some good linework

i feel the overall picture to too dark... but i like what i can see... i like the dirtiness of the picture... the feeling that this things been around for a while or been in a few fights in his/her time... the colors are simple to help focus on the line work... a nice starting entry... :3

dommi-fresh responds:

cheers ... it is very dark though

[Cigarette smoke yeaaah....]

Good starting entry...

it has a feel dark theme about this picture i like, some areas like the lips, skin, nose and top are all well done, i feel her eye is too white for the picture... also a tad small?... i also feel that he arm is "put ontop" of her rather then part of her as there is no logical join, i do like the elbow gear and wire/pipes... i have to agree with the hand not been to a great standard as well... looking forward to more work for yourself :3

iVomit responds:

Thanks for the critique! :]

[Tankman]

wait... oh god no!!!.

when did you finish that!?... ahhh god i need to finish mine *sad face*

i like what you have done with it, although you haven't really touched the model to much with painting... you have done a fab job :3... now... wheres my paints ¬¬

Captain responds:

Yeah man, up your game! I want to see what you come up with.

[A little Anxious when its Dark]

fear of the dark...

now iv seen your artwork progress over the years... love flicking through your sketch books and what not... and knowing this is a quickie makes more sense seen as there's a few things wrong with it.... but overall i like the construction... do you listen to music while you work on artwork?...

TheShadling responds:

I love Iron Maiden if the reference is why your asking.

[Jealousy]

own characters?....

artworks not bad... but own characters?!.... the one on the left is a blatant rip of off "candy and cola" from soda pop miniatures!.... ok sure... not all the details are there but it has enough for me to check it and confirm... now... that aside... the artwork isnt bad like i already said.... some of the lines are a little sharp and odd.. might want to work on human figures a little more, i like the light effect on the arms...

nice work... but i really think you should check out what i said...

8/10 for the artwork *regardless of the character*

Maszrum responds:

No offense but learn how to read. As I stated. This piece is for REIQs contest. Characters belong to REIQ. As I wrote in the description. Thank you very much.