Ah poor blackhole sheep
Cute and not so cuddly, another great short by wonchop, top notch quality and animation once again, loved it!
only down point would be length but i cant really see how you could of made it longer without making it drag...
need i say more?.... 8/10
-legolaSS [NitroKitty]
I had plans to throw in some rescue plot, but time restrictions as well as work put a damper on that.
Either way, the maximum length it could've been was 90 seconds.
Right
Ok first things first...
the concept of giant robots battling it out seems all to familiar... but putting that aside, the music went well with the theme, I enjoyed the into, setting the seen very well... however you must look at it from a viewers point of view, I don't know what you are talking about when you abbreviate words... meka and machine are words I understand, I know this may be a minor thing but its tucking up the movie that makes it all better, I can see a lot of thought went into this as you are going to make a full length flash
I am never keen on "trailers" for I believe they should not be in the portal, only finished products, thus why there is an alpha space...
the graphics where reasonable, (the anime genera), over use of same symbols stands out, the movement seemed rather two stroke you need to add more frames in the animation on the humans, the robots were done nicely but again they need to be neatened up a lot of ruff edges.
try not to prolong panning *there was a point where the girl was standing facing the wind (there was no animation on the girl/man or grass) and it panned down to the man, it seemed like a long time even if it was not.*
do not think this as been harsh but if I replied like everyone else saying it was fantastic and great, you would not improve it and carry one to make a mundane flash, I think you could do a lot better if you spent more time on it and not trying to get as much done as you can in a short time period...
Work that bit harder, do that extra few fames, make it quicker in places and neaten the whole thing up, let friends or family watch it to show weak points in the movie and then redo parts...
I hope to see future flash animations from you...
legolaSS - [Nitro kitten productions]
Appreciate it. I'm still getting used to animating in flash so naturally there's going to be a lot of things that need to be worked on.
Yeah thought went in, but only because this movie is based off of novels I've already written. 3 completed, the 4th almost done, and the 1st in the process of publishing. I did tons of art for it, I am releasing an event compilation book featuring all the major scenes in the first 3 painted out. I've just put off doing animation for a long time.
The end scene will have their hair blowing and such, honestly, it was 2 am and I wanted to put up the entire thing. I will update the movie once I make that adjustment.
So yeah, I appreciate it, you can't get better if everyone says it's great already.
You know when it sucks...
beaucse you have to write what the pictures are...
omfg ur ghey an i hat u lotz lololololololo
Intressting...
ok Lecca, may i point out that when she walks its more then just 3 or 4 frames, anway the graphics wheren't bad, but could be inproved, i recomend you spend alot more time on the animtion beausce it looked wierd, the sceen inwhich she was "walking" the floor did not move so it looked akward, also where the otter looking creature is stood on the background is not complete, i also recomend you work at a slightly higher frame rate beaucse it will make it smoother, athough it dose require more work, also somthing which i found quite amusing is that its called Hand of tangreal, but where she flicks her hair back she dosent have any hands, also when shes "running" the background trees move the same speed as the bushes infront of them, this is wrong the trees should move slower then the bushes beaucse of perspective, i know this is only your sketched piece of work, but im just telling you how you could inprove it, but from what im seeing its fairly good... athough im not sure this will get into the portal, but good luck with future animtions... and one last thing, i really like the picture of the girl above the play button but in the moive she dosent look the same i think it could be somthing to do with the eyes... away way good luck in future animtions
-LegolaSS- (NitroKitty Productions)
Thank you very much for the reveiw.
Yes, as you've noticed, I didn't spend much time on this. I had a week of class time to make it. So it didn't turn out that good. And guess what. you're probably the first person to get the pun "Hand of Tangreal" Although, sadly. The main character "Lecca" was supposed to have her hand in this animation (Something's gone wrong with my movie clip and it's disappeared) Although in the series she does not!
Oh. And the picture of the girl above the play button I actually took from from the first episode from the series. Which is almost finished, and is a MUCH higher quality (as in my drawing quality) then this. Thank you so very much for your nice reveiw.
you submitted this before
Not only have you resubmitted it, but its not even finished!!!, it got blamed last time, and i belive you could inprove this to a much high standard then you have.
I never submitted anything that didn't pass.
I was going to give this 0 untill...
to be honest i thought it was just a silly dance music video, untill the options, its was great, i loved the newgrounds tank one :)
do i need to tell people to read the description or are they just going to assume that whatever happens in the first 20 seconds is going to define the rest of the movie?
why dint we see the killing?
you got my all exited as well... i really throught we were going to see a clock die?... but its true... after strawberry clock... who likes them?
I like dr. pepper!
a bit slow for me
i really liked the consept of worms and halo mixxed together, the problem was the slow pace and the same phases repeated, like "ha ha" really got on my nevers... anyway good work.. not bad for your first
every tipe of worm had a special voice... it makes limits you know..
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